Week before half term

The week before half term we showed our first draft to Shaun in his lesson. The class had to fill out a feedback sheet on their thoughts on our film title sequence. They had to say what was good, what needs improving and what does not work at all. Most of our feedback we had got from other people was good and appropriate feedback. There were a few things that we had change and we will do our best in changing them. One of characters were not right for the role so we will have to change them and we are changing the character to Alan Rickman. We are happy as a group for what we have produced after the things that we have changed.